This is a personally revised version of 's commission with Freya: [link]
This version is based on the sketch revision I had proposed during the sketch phase, but was not used in the final. In addition to the features in my sketch proposal, it also uses some of GIMP's tools to enhance the lighting.
I was intending to do this immediately after Rankurogane posted her version up, but due to time constraints I couldn't get to it until just recently. Seeing as I wanted to finish it before New Year's, it is a bit rushed but at least it does the job I think. ^^
I don't know how I missed this! It's absolutely beautiful, I love her pose, the lighting, her hair, everything! This is such a gorgeous picture, it's just amazing!
Hey, O-Chibi-kun and official married man! How ya' doin'?! ^.^
Thank you very much for the comments. ^^ Although it's not entirely my work since I'm just fixing something from one of my commissionees, you could say it's a de facto collaboration since I was pretty involved during the early planning stages of the original too.
I'm sorry.. I've became a big trouble to you.. please forgive me about Freya's face.. and I think this revised version really have a strong enchance in the room lightning.. gosh.. I wish I had those ideas earlier..
Please check your email I send just now, I have something special for you.
And do consider my offer about reposting to your account -- you can still show your fans the true "Final" version of the commission, because this is what I would have wanted them to see in the first place.
It's either because I'm drunk celebrating my anniversary and the new year or my keen eye of perception (+4 on any game of D&D) but does the near eye look dis-proportionately bigger or the far eye look too small? Just my first impression.
Thank you very much for the comments. ^^
Although it's not entirely my work since I'm just fixing something from one of my commissionees, you could say it's a de facto collaboration since I was pretty involved during the early planning stages of the original too.
Just remember this is more of a collab, like with yours. ^^
Please check your email I send just now, I have something special for you.
And do consider my offer about reposting to your account -- you can still show your fans the true "Final" version of the commission, because this is what I would have wanted them to see in the first place.
It's either because I'm drunk celebrating my anniversary and the new year or my keen eye of perception (+4 on any game of D&D) but does the near eye look dis-proportionately bigger or the far eye look too small? Just my first impression.
Kidding aside, it's more an issue of angle, so from that angle the near eye will look bigger, and more so since the far eye is covered by hair.